Generra Johnson
Blog 9: Group Assignment on
Editing Papers
We decided to use the paper that I wrote (Andrea) for the assignment.
These are our ideas and comments so far.
Question:
What features of the comments give information for the revision of the paper?
Coding of the Comments:
- No negative comments, but positive
feedback.
- Supports the student in a positive
manner.
- Encourages the student to keep writing
and edit where necessary, without being aggressive.
- Gives examples of sources that can be
used.
- Explains what needs work and follows
up with how to "fix" the revision.
Student
Reactions:
Andrea - This was my paper that we were working on. I did not have any hard
feelings about the comments from my professor. I thought I was doing the
assignment wrong, but I was assured that I was not, and it gave me hope that I
will complete the paper without worrying too much about it. To me it was
all positive feedback.
Shana -
Generra -
Pose a Question:
We did not get this far yet. We have no question as of today.
We decided to use the paper that I wrote (Andrea) for the assignment. These are our ideas and comments so far.
Question:
What features of the comments give information for the revision of the paper?
Coding of the Comments:
Andrea - This was my paper that we were working on. I did not have any hard feelings about the comments from my professor. I thought I was doing the assignment wrong, but I was assured that I was not, and it gave me hope that I will complete the paper without worrying too much about it. To me it was all positive feedback.
Shana -
Generra -
Pose a Question:
We did not get this far yet. We have no question as of today.
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